Subordinate clauses

All hope was lost, unless the citizens ignored the signs.

It was a bright cold day in April.The clocks were striking 13.Winston Smith had his chin nuzzled into his chest to escape the wind. He slipped quickly through Victory Mansions. Not quickly enough to prevent a swirl of gritty dust from entering along with him.


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  1. Christopher Waugh Avatar

    The final sentence needs to be improved: Partly for stylistic reasons. Who wasn’t quick enough?

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